Saturday, May 24, 2008

Draft of my scene in Dragonwings

The demons told us to stay in a big room for a week. They talked with us and played with us. There were beds for sleeping which were very comfortable. All the time,we smelled the delicious dishes from the kitchen. Besides that, there were washroom for bathing.

Finally, though, the demons called me for interview, I found they already had a big bunch of papers on my father. Inside it was the record of his first interview, which ran fro someone hundred and fifty pages. They spend an hour looking at it and then chat with me about my village and kinsmen. They tried to prove I was my father's son.

Finally, the demons allowed me to enter the demons land and kept my interview information on their record for future use.

1 comment:

Wootang01 said...

Excellent work, Mandy, you have turned the inspectors into cuddly home economics teachers - like Ms. Fok! If you want to see what the demons as fearful creatures, read Muky's response:

http://2r9mukykung.blogspot.com/2008/05/scamper.html